You tell me you don’t know who you are
You tell me you’re so lost without me
Just take a deep breath and listen to your heart
Pass the hurt and all these tears, you will let go of me
I’m sorry, but I’m not picking up the phone
I will only hurt you even more, and I don’t mean to
So with my hidden tears and all my secret emotions, I’ll leave you alone
One day you will thank me for letting you be loved by someone who truly deserves you
I don’t mean to hurt you, because this thing we thought we had ain’t right
It’s just that we both know we’re not meant to be
So I’ll be the bad guy here, and I’ll end this fight
Live your life and just forget about me
You can think ill of me, if that helps you moving on
You can hate me too, if that helps anything at all
Hope you’ll drift away to someone you do belong
Someone who will be there to catch you when you fall
So don’t come around looking for me, demanding to see me
Cause I don’t want you to linger in our past
I don’t want you to fall in love all over again with me
Nothing you can do or say can save what we had
Jingle
March 1, 2010 at 03:55
u r rich in emotions,
glad to see u shine with so many poems which are all talented and beautiful!
Best,
moondai
March 3, 2010 at 21:59
aww, you are far too kind!!
fiveloaf
March 2, 2010 at 05:08
very nice.
moondai
March 3, 2010 at 21:59
Jingle
March 2, 2010 at 17:02
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/03/01/awards-on-the-sunshine-blogger-buddy-and-more/
a sunshine award 4 u.
Happy March!
nanno1982
March 3, 2010 at 00:44
This is extremely sad…
I had those feelings before.. and I understand your hurt!
Very well written poem!
moondai
March 3, 2010 at 21:58
thanks soo much
trying to keep it real as possible
Jannie Funster
March 3, 2010 at 20:23
The second to last line made me cry.
beautiful job of getting across the feelings.
And hey, I came here via Jingle and I am hereby bestowing the “Jannie Funster Lucky Lupine Award” upon YOUR poetry blog! You can see it and whisk it home away from this post of mine…
http://www.janniefunster.com/2010/03/02/the-blog-party-a-poem/
Whoo-hoo!!!
moondai
March 3, 2010 at 21:59
thanks for the award! Thanks for the comment! I always like feedback from others
william
March 4, 2010 at 01:44
hello william here from jingles poetry thursday, wow, there was a lot of emotions in this piece, relationships are up and down, its life, great post
brian miller
March 5, 2010 at 02:06
so much emotion wrapped up in this one…almost swept me away. so nicely done!
Jingle
March 5, 2010 at 21:48
how r u?
Busy?
hope that see u in the Rally.
it is never too late to join.
Happy Friday1
Jingle
March 7, 2010 at 20:15
No problem,
see you next time!
Happy Sunday!
megzone
March 9, 2010 at 18:41
Oh My…
thats a real sweet and heartwrenching poem Moondai..
and here;s a thank you award…
http://megzone.wordpress.com/2010/03/09/poetic-resonance/
shoelessboywonder
March 9, 2010 at 19:02
Love it, completely agree with brian miller, truly emotional peace. i have written few along these lines myself mostly short sonnets, many on the darker side of life as well as inspirational pieces of moving on. I am glad to see poems like this out there.
makes me feel like i am not the only one. >.> take care and hope to read more of your work soon.
ishabelle
March 10, 2010 at 05:53
the poem is very emtional… but i could feel that you were really writing from the heart, not just the brain… i want to give you this: http://ishabellemanalo.wordpress.com/2010/03/10/best-blog-award
Ji
May 13, 2010 at 21:04
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/05/13/the-celebrate-poet-of-april-award-announcement-for-nomination/
Please feel free to nominate fellow poets for April Celebrate Poetry award.
Many thanks!